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Heat up Hump Day with a tantalizing hook for readers...a challenge I take with a group of other authors.
Here's an excerpt from from Chapter 35 of THE PRINCE CHARMING HOAX. We join Leah and Jonathan at the end of an eventful day.
“Let’s stay here tonight, Jonathan," Leah said. "Do you mind?”
“Not as long as I can collect the reward you promised to pay for my services.”
Leah put her arm around his waist, and they headed for the bedroom. “Not only will I keep my promise, I’ll throw in a mystery bonus,” she said and grinned.
“Why is it a mystery?”
They had reached the master suite. She pulled the box with the cock ring out of her nightstand drawer and handed it to him. “Because I’m not sure what to do with it, but I think you will.”
Jonathan’s eyes widened in surprise as he shook the contents out into his hand. Then he dropped his pants and pushed her gently down on the bed. “Let’s call it a performance bonus, Ms. Gold, and I’ll show you how it works...”
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Haha...my eyes widened right along with Jonathan's. You sure did leave us hanging on this one.
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DeleteCrikey! That was a surprise.....for everyone. Great hook and I hope he *does* know what to do with...it. ��
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Thanks, Jess. Gotta keep 'em turning pages!!
DeleteGreat hook, well done!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Lucy. Thanks for the visit!
DeleteWhole different meaning to "put a ring on it"! ;-)
ReplyDeleteLovely hook, Elyse!
Ha! Thanks so much C.C.!
DeleteYou never know what will come out of the drawers! Makes me want to know what happens next. Nice job.
ReplyDeletehehehe. Thanks for the visit and feedback, Flossie!
DeleteHe certainly seems comfortable with the concept. :D
ReplyDeleteOh, yeah!
Deletelol entertaining dialogue :-)
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed ;-) Thanks for the visit, Sandra.
DeleteAnd then he dropped his pants, lol. No hesitation on his part ;) Glad to see he's willing to try new things :D
ReplyDeleteYes! Thanks for "hopping" in ;-)
DeleteGreat hook and I want more!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alexandra ;-)
Deleteperformance bonus. nice! Good hook! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed! Thanks for the visit ;-)
DeleteHa! That's some bonus! Lol
ReplyDeleteYeah, bonuses like these inspire great performances :-) Thanks for the feedback!
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